घातली नथ
नथीला लावून
ओढला रथ !
कौतुकाने तिला
अस्मान झाले थोडे :
पण खट्याळ राणी
म्हणाली काय :
" छान सोय
झाली बाय !
नक्को आता
रथाला घोडे !"
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The Nose Ring Ride
One day, a fairy
wore a shiny nose ring.
Then, with a giggle,
she hitched it to a chariot string!
Up, up it flew—
sparkles in the sky!
Even the clouds
peeked down, wondering why.
The royal court
was full of praise...
But the cheeky queen
just laughed and said,
“Well, isn’t this a clever way?
We don’t need horses
from today!”
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