Sunday, May 15, 2011

परीचा पराक्रम

एकदा परीने
घातली नथ
नथीला लावून
ओढला रथ !
कौतुकाने तिला
अस्मान झाले थोडे :
पण खट्याळ राणी
म्हणाली काय :
" छान सोय
झाली बाय !
नक्को आता                                       
रथाला घोडे !"


1 comment:

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